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Ultramatic
23-04-2008, 09:27 PM
I'm doing a cartoon Tasmanian Tiger, aimed for kids between 4-8 for a picture book.
I havn't edited them yet, so sorry for bad quality.
Here they are:
I need some comments if they are any good. Any comments appreciated. :)
Cheers in advance
Not Bad, it's easy looking and would easily target 4-8yr olds.
Eaglez Wingz
23-04-2008, 09:35 PM
When i first saw em, i was thinking, " ARHHH they'll probably just be little stick figures with heads too big for their bodies". But once i looked at em. THey looked pretty cool. nice job man. A definete winner with the kiddies. :D
Blitz
23-04-2008, 09:38 PM
I don't really like the eyes, they look a little strange...they kind of look off in different directions, but it does look good overall.
Scott
23-04-2008, 10:42 PM
The body needs a little work, but the head is done well. That's what I think, anyway.
JemaKnight
23-04-2008, 11:24 PM
The eyes...
They stare into your soul...
Ultramatic
24-04-2008, 11:36 AM
Thanks guys for the help so far. All of your comments are greatly appreciated.
The eyes...
They stare into your soul...
Lol that made me laugh.
Keep the comments rolling!
Ultramatic
24-04-2008, 11:36 AM
Thanks guys for the help so far. All of your comments are greatly appreciated.
The eyes...
They stare into your soul...
Lol that made me laugh.
Keep the comments rolling!
EDIT: I hate double posting.
Danon
24-04-2008, 01:14 PM
I think the second picture is a lot better than the first, but like Blitz said, the eyes need work, maybe make the outer circle's outline thicker black?
Just my 2 cents
BoonMcNougat
24-04-2008, 04:17 PM
I prefer the second also.
It needs a little more work, to look a bit cleaner.
S2333
24-04-2008, 05:27 PM
It reminds me of Garfield.
I think it needs the eyes to be reduced before kids will jump for joy to it.
Also my sister who is 10 said she likes the 2nd one.
xParad0Xx
24-04-2008, 05:39 PM
I'm doing a cartoon Tasmanian Tiger, aimed for kids between 4-8 for a picture book.
I havn't edited them yet, so sorry for bad quality.
Here they are:
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b253/ABranch/Tiger0001.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b253/ABranch/Tiger.jpg
I need some comments if they are any good. Any comments appreciated. :)
Cheers in advance
http://www.mountstuart.tased.edu.au/tasmanian%20devil%20site/devi99.jpg
Hmmm
Ultramatic
24-04-2008, 05:47 PM
I'm doing a cartoon Tasmanian Tiger, aimed for kids between 4-8 for a picture book.
I havn't edited them yet, so sorry for bad quality.
Here they are:
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b253/ABranch/Tiger0001.jpg
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b253/ABranch/Tiger.jpg
I need some comments if they are any good. Any comments appreciated. :)
Cheers in advance
http://www.mountstuart.tased.edu.au/tasmanian%20devil%20site/devi99.jpg
Hmmm
Hmmm......
I can tell your from the mainland.
THIS is a Tassie Tiger...
http://cache.eb.com/eb/image?id=26753&rendTypeId=4
xParad0Xx
24-04-2008, 05:51 PM
Curses! Blame Google image!
EDIT: LOL i thought it was meant to be a Tasmanian Devil
Note to Self: lrn2read
BoonMcNougat
24-04-2008, 05:57 PM
lol@paradoxtryingtoown
They look very very very very jolly O_O
triggen
03-05-2008, 11:10 PM
http://i21.photobucket.com/albums/b253/ABranch/Tiger0001.jpg
Poor guy, his right foot is larger than his left.
kotra
04-05-2008, 12:00 AM
2nd picture remind me of Homer Simpson. It is the eyes...
Eaglez Wingz
04-05-2008, 08:40 AM
Lol Paradox. Like Boon Said "trying" To Win/Own.
Jader7777
09-05-2008, 09:09 PM
...
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6434/tiger0001fy1.jpg
Ultramatic
09-05-2008, 10:44 PM
...
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6434/tiger0001fy1.jpg
Huh?
Whats with the bad Luigi cartoon? I have seen it a few places...
Dimentio Delight
07-08-2008, 05:05 PM
Lol, the one that is standing's eyes are abit crooked.
But other than that they look great good luck.
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